When I was 16teen...
I liked a Doors and Deep Purple and play on guitar on street, smoke kanabis and drink vodka, spirit, beer and all that can get.
I had fighting on street for trifle and didn't feared anyone.
I didn't worry about anything at all.
I have so much girls and friends that was very difficult to count them.
I HAD NO MONEY! And it was great.
Often I didn't was at home about three month (summer) because I went to travel in mountain and forest or sea-coast when we could doing what we want.
Now I am the best husband and father in the world that's great but sometimes I hope that in next life I'll be 16 again.
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They who are 16 as yet - don't lose this, 'cause when you will 30-40 you will can not return it never.
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Должна признать, что прониклась, написано с четким осознанием того, о чем хочешь написать)))) мне понравилось! Спасибо.
П.С. Вы, пожалуйста меня простите, я исправила ошибки, если вам будет интересно- я напишу анализ каждой, чтоб вы знали на что вам надо обратить внимание.
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When I was 16teen...
I liked a Doors and Deep Purple and play on guitar on street, smoke kanabis and drink vodka, spirit, beer and all that can get.
I had fighting on street for trifle and didn't feared anyone.
I didn't worry about anything at all.
I have so much girls and friends that was very difficult to count them.
I HAD NO MONEY! And it was great.
Often I didn't was at home about three month (summer) because I went to travel in mountain and forest or sea-coast when we could doing what we want.
Now I am the best husband and father in the world that's great but sometimes I hope that in next life I'll be 16 again.
....
They who are 16 as yet - don't lose this, 'cause when you will 30-40 you will can not return it never.
When I was 16...
I liked the Doors and Deep Purple and played the guitar in the street, I smoked.
I had fights in the street for trifle and I wasn't afraid of anybody.
I didn't worry about anything at all.
I used to have so many girls and friends it was even difficult to count them.
I HAD NO MONEY! And it was great.
I often left home for traveling. I could spend about three months (summer) climbing the mountains or hiking the forests or just staying at the sea-coast. That was the time when I could do what I wanted.
Now I am the best husband and father in the world! That's great but sometimes I hope to be 16 again in the next life.
....
You, who are 16 now - don't lose this, 'cause when you are 30-40 you won't be able to return it.
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