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power I'm geting power from the music. I feel, how energy feets me. And want dance and sing. it is great feel. More pleasure, when myself playing the music. Not in vain, in the old time, warriors inspired sounds of drums and horns. Power music is great power in the world. i hope, you understend me)

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I get strength from the music. I feel like the energy nourishes me. And you want to dance and sing. This is a strong feeling. Get more pleasure when I play music. No wonder the old days, warriors inspired by the sounds of drums and horns. The power of music is the greatest force in the world. I hope you understand me.

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I'm geting power from the music. I feel, how energy feets me. And want dance and sing. it is great feel. More pleasure, when myself playing the music. Not in vain, in the old time, warriors inspired sounds of drums and horns. Power music is great power in the world. i hope, you understend me)

 

I get my power from music.I feel charged with energy and I want to sing and dance

It is great feeling (I couldn't understand the rest ,,,,what do you mean by ....not in vain?)now you are starting new topic about the old times so you should write (.) then write your new topic begin with capital letter

Then you said (power music is great power) this is wrong ( the power of the music is the greatest power in the world)


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