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I can't stop loving you Hey Dashing you know i love you and i've already love your for 3years.But how can you break my heart over again and again?Am i not a good girl?You told me you are not fit me because you are just a shit man.But,I mean really,I never think so.You are knida perfect,how would you say that? I'm so sad so hurt coz i don't know how to make you love me.I```I have no idea.But 1 thing you should understand i will always be with you by the way you hope.I'm sorry.I just want to tell everyone that you are my first love.I don't want anyothers.Only you it's my dream.You said we should be friends instead of lovers`But i just found that you don't regards me as a friend.It seems that i am the one who you still hate.I 'm so sad and i kinda wanna go to hell!How can you always break my heart and said this?I hate you!````````But you love it just because i love you so much. Hey,reply to me if you see. I'm Sue.

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Hey Dashing, You know I love you and I have been loving you from 3 years. ut how can you break my heart over and over again? Am I not a good girl? You told me that you are not fit for me because you are just a shit man. But I mean really! I never think so. You are kinda perfect. How can you say that? Im so sad so hurt because I don’t know how to make you love me. I have no idea. But one thing you should understand that I will always be with you. Im sorry. I just want to tell everyone that you are my first love. I don’t want any other. You are my only dream. You said “we should be friends instead of lovers” But I found now that you don’t even regards me as your friend. It seems that I am the only one you still hate. I am so sad and I want to go to hell! How can you always break my heart and you even said “I hate you”!. But you know I love you so much.

Hey, reply me if you see this message. I’m Sue.


Hey Sue, 

It happens some time in love. I think you are beautiful, dont waste your time on some one who dont care for you. Try to remain happy and calm. I hope and wish that you get a lover soon.  I just made few corrections in your text must have a look at them . Best of luck.

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I can't stop loving you

Hey Dashing, you know i love you and i've already loved you for 3 years. But, how can you break my heart over and over again?Am i not a good girl?You told me you are not a good fit for me because you are just a shit man.But, I mean really,I never thought so.You are kind of perfect, so why would you say that?
I'm so sad, so hurt, because i don't know how to make you love me.I```I have no idea.But 1 thing you should understand, I will always be with you to support your hopes and dreams.I'm sorry,I just want to tell everyone that you are my first love and I don't want any others.Only you, it's my dream.You said we should be friends instead of lovers`But i just found out that you don't regards me as a friend.It seems that i am the one who you still hate.I 'm so sad and i kind of want to go to hell!How can you always break my heart and say things like this?I hate you!````````But you love it just because you know i love you so much.
Hey,reply to me if you see this. I'm Sue.

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i forget to tell u that u'r so cute <3 <3
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I agree with Donovane malichka
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darling u know something in life u can expect evrything from someone u don't think that it will be him i get u very well i know what u'r feeling now but with time evrything will change trust me just u have to be strong & u have to trust yourself more & more... & like the other girls said maybe Dashing will realize of your love & maybe u will give up for this love... but u r too young dear u have to move on and don't ever waste u'r time again about one person who dosn't care abt u or loving u best wishes for u i'm always in u'r side <3

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