First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, my name is Koray Korkmaz. I’m 26 years old. I was born in 1986 in Diyarbakir, Turkey. My father is an engineer and my mother is a housewife. 

I’m a student in university, and I am also working for a private mining company (LNS Mining).

I like going out with my friends and I like football. My favourite football team is Galatasaray. I like eating vegetables. I have brown eyes and blonde hair. I am tall.

I have absoulutely no clue why you would include the last three sentences. But it is great that you are here. 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi,_ 
My name is Koray Korkmaz._ 
I’m 26 years old._ 
I was born in 1986 in Diyarbakir._ 
My fahter is an engineer and my mother is a housewife._ 
I’m a student in university also I'm working for a private company_ (LNS Mining)._ 
I like going out with my friends and I like football. My favourite football team is Galatasaray._ 
I like eating vegetables._ 
I have brown eyes and blonde hair._ 
I am tall._ 

Please do not forget about punctuation. 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi
My name is Koray Korkmaz
I’m 26 years old
I was born in 1986 in Diyarbakir Turkey
I live in Istanbul Turkey
My father is an engineer and my mother is a housewife
I’m a student in university  I am also working a private company.(LNS Mining)
I like going out with my friends and I like football. My favourite football team is Galatasaray
I like eating vegetables
I have brown eyes and blonde hair
I am tall