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Walter Elías Disney fue el creador del mundo mágico más grande del mundo. Nació en 1901 y su pasión por los dibujos animados lo llevo a conseguir el éxito que nadie podía imaginar en aquella época.
Creador de personajes como Mickey mouse, blanca nieves y los siete enanitos, entre otros. El éxito de su creación deja ganancias por 30 millones de dólares al año hasta ahora.
Después de la Segunda Guerra Mundial, visitó parques en Virginia y California, los que encendieron su imaginación y su pasión por los parques temáticos. Dedicó la mayoría de su tiempo y energías a la creación de dos parques: "Disneylandia", en el Condado Orange de California el que abrió en 1955, siendo bien recibido aunque criticado por su mundo imaginario demasiado perfecto; y "Walt Disney World" en Orlando, Florida, proyecto que comenzó en secreto bajo el nombre de "Proyecto X" para alejar a periodistas y funcionarios del gobierno, el cual anunció diez años más tarde pero que no logró ver debido a su muerte de cáncer en un pulmón ocasionada por el cigarro en 1966, a sus 65 años. Sin embargo su hermano Roy logra abrir el parque en Orlando en el año 1971, muriendo también tres meses después.
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I NEED TO THIS WRITE TEXT IN ENGLISH, IF SOMEBODY CAN HELP ME .. I WILL BE GLAD !
Walter, Elias Disney was the creator of the world 's largest magic world. Born in 1901 and his passion for cartoons it took to achieve success than anyone could imagine at the time.
Creator of characters like Mickey Mouse , Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs , among others. The success of his creation leaves profit by $ 30 million a year before.
After World War II ,he visited parks in Virginia and California, which fired his imagination and passion for the theme parks. He spent most of his time and energies to the creation of two parks : " Disneyland " in Orange County California which opened in 1955 and was well received but criticized that his imaginary world too perfect . " Walt Disney World" Orlando , Florida , a project that began in secret under the name " project X" to deter journalists and government officials , who announced ten years later but failed to see because of his death from cancer in the lung caused by cigar in 1966 , at age 65 . However his brother Roy manages to open the park in Orlando in 1971 , also died three months later.
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I NEED TO WRITE THIS TEXT IN ENGLISH, IF SOMEBODY CAN HELP ME .. I WILL BE GLAD !
Walter, Elias Disney was the creator of the world 's largest magic world. Born in 1901 and his passion for cartoons it took to achieve success than anyone could imagine at the time.
Creator of characters like Mickey Mouse , Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs , among others. The success of his creation leaves profit by $ 30 million a year before.
After World War II ,he visited parks in Virginia and California, which fired his imagination and passion for the theme parks. He spent most of his time and energies to the creation of two parks : " Disneyland " in Orange County California which opened in 1955 and was well received but criticized that his imaginary world too perfect . " Walt Disney World" Orlando , Florida , a project that began in secret under the name " project X" to deter journalists and government officials , who announced ten years later but failed to see because of his death from cancer in the lung caused by cigar in 1966 , at age 65 . However his brother Roy manages to open the park in Orlando in 1971 , also died three months later.
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Tom!!! Thanks a lot to help me. I had to send a project about Walt disney world today at 10 am... I couldn't sleep because I didn't have time to finish it. That's why I put 1 slide here... I was really worried. You're my hero. Thanks again. =)
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Tom!!! Thanks a lot to help me. I had to send a project about Walt disney world today at 10 am... I couldn't sleep because I didn't have time to finish it. That's why I put 1 slide here... I was really worried. You're my hero. Thanks again. =)
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