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Travelling A:Hey,XXX, This semester is near the end .Do you have any plans? B: I would like to arrange a travel for myself? A: I consider that go travelling is really a good chocie.you can look around ,and you will certainly have fun. B:Yes. I think so. A: So where have you been for travelling? Which place was the your favioute ? B: Let me see. I have been to Shandong,Sichuan,Hunan and last year I have been to Shanghai. Personally I think ,Shanghai is my favorite place.There are so many nice buildings,tasty food and the transport there was very convient. A:Oh It sounds fun. So can you tell me some thing which impressed you in Shanghai? B:Yes, the things impressed me most are skyscrpers which developed everywhere so quickly like the mushrooms after rain.so now ,if you take a look of Lujiazui square, East Nanjing Road, the orient pearl tower , hsbc.you will find these parts are flooded with skyscrapers. It’s really amazing!! A:Its really cool. Thanks for you sharing. Bye B:Bye.

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Travelling

A:    Hey, XXX, This semester is nearing the end. Do you have any plans?
B:    I would like to arrange a journey travel for myself.  ? 
A:    I consider that going travelling is really a good chocie choice. You can look
around, and you will certainly have fun.
B:    Yes. I think so.
A:    So whereabouts have you been for travelling? Which place was the your
favioute favourite?
B:    Let me see. I have been to Shandong, Sichuan, Hunan and last year I went 
have been to Shanghai. Personally I think, Shanghai is my favorite place. There are so many nice buildings, tasty food and the transport there was very convenient.
A:    Oh It sounds fun. So can you tell me some thing something which impressed you in Shanghai?
B:    Yes, the things that impressed me most are were the skyscrapers which have developed everywhere so quickly like the mushrooms after rain. So now, if you take a look at of Lujiazui square, East Nanjing Road, the orient pearl tower and hsbc you will find these parts are flooded with skyscrapers. It’s really amazing!!
A:    It's really cool. Thanks for you sharing. Bye
B:    Bye.

 

Please note correct position of comma and full stop is imediately after the word as follows:

 

A sentence. Another sentence.    Correct

A sentence .Another sentence.    Incorrect

 

The word 'and' is used for the last item in a list. (Again, please note the position of the commas).

 

I like the colours red, orange, yellow and blue. 

 

 

 

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