My first time

This is my first time visiting this place._It's all new to me;_now I still don't know how to talk to people or even how to become friends with them.
Anyway,_things will change with my efforts. And I'm sure I will make many friends here,_in this country that speaks different language.
So,_let's develop ourselves together!_Hope to talk to you soon,_my new friends.
Time for bed,_see you next day.

Your English is not too bad, just remember you need a space after punctuation. [,.?!] Best of luck to you! Which country are you staying in?

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My first time

This is the first time for me to be here. It's all fresh too me, now I still don't know how to talk to people or even how to make friends with them.
Anyway,things would change by my efforts. And sure I I'm sure will make many friends here, from different countryies in different languages.
So, let's develop ourselves together! I Hope to talk to you soon, my new friends.
Time for bed,see you next day tomorrow.