My city

I want to describe to you the place where I live. It is a small city in Belarus, which is located in Europe. This place is very beautiful, but If you haven't don't visited my city perhaps you will tell me that it is very small and ugly. But you should know feel our people, because if you are will be friendly to us them, they we also will be kind to you.

Baranovichi - is a very big railway station. We have a lot of industrial enterprises and have own a big university. We,also, have a lot of possibility for shopping and for spending free time.
Our city is very green and we have many places worth visiting place. I  will*1 be very glad to meet you in my city!

*1you may want to say " I would be .." would is a word that is inviting , will is usually used when plans are already made. 

As you noticed above, you may wan to work on "is" , "are" and "the" 

Good luck :D

My city

I want to describe to you the place where I live. It is a small city in Belarus which located in Europe. This place is very beautiful, but If you don't visit it perhaps you will tell me that it is very small and ugly. But, you should know its people, because you will be friends with them , they are also kind. Baranovichi is very big railway station. We have a lot of industrial enterprises and a big university.We have a lot of possibility for shopping and for spending free time.
Our city is very green and we have many worth visiting place. I will be very glad to meet you in my city!

you make me very Interested about your city

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