First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Its my first composition on this website and it tells me I need to introduce myself~
Well, Im a Chinese girl in Shaanxi province, the weather here is cold and dry, but not as dry as it in Beijing. last month I went to there for some business, my throat was not very comfortable just when i get down the train, What's more, the sunshine was sting into my parasol in every minute, and I was always in the bad condition of being thirst...So I dont like Beijing very much.
In my spare time, I like reading some books, What Im reading now is the book named<why children need to go to school> written by a Japanese writer named Kenzaburo Oe, he has got a Noble Prize in 1994。
I like this website, maybe i could make some friends here.
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You write some good sentences, but there are two bad things I notice here. One, you don't use apostrophes, and two, you miss a lot of capital letters (especially for the word "I", which should always be capitalised).
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Hello amnesia, I am a native English speaker from the US, maybe we can help each other?
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