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First notebook entry: Introducing myself My name is hafsa , I'm 13 years old , from morocco, i live in casablanca and i want improve my english .

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Hafsa , I'm 13 years old , from morocco, i live in casablanca and i want  to improve my english .

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is hafsa , I'm 13 years old , from morocco, i live in casablanca and i want  improve my english .

 

Corrections are just grammatically. your English is nice.

* Names always start with capital letters = Hafsa, Casablanca, Morocco

* periods are used between sentences not commas; and make one letter space after commas or periods not before.

* ( I ) is always capital

* add ( to ) after want  =  want to improve

My name is Hafsa. I'm 13 years old, from Morocco. I live in Casablanca and I want to improve my English.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is hafsa , I'm 13 years old, from morocco, i live in casablanca and i want improve my english .

 

Corrections are just grammatically. your English is nice.

* Names always start with capital letters = Hafsa, Casablanca, Morocco

* periods are used between sentences not commas; and make one letter space after commas or periods not before.

* ( I ) is always capital

My name is Hafsa. I'm 13 years old, from Morocco. I live in Casablanca and I want improve my English .

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Thank you !
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Nice to meet you Hafsa!! Enjoy this site!!

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