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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
My name is Hafsa , I'm 13 years old , from morocco, i live in casablanca and i want to improve my english .
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
My name is hafsa , I'm 13 years old , from morocco, i live in casablanca and i want improve my english .
Corrections are just grammatically. your English is nice.
* Names always start with capital letters = Hafsa, Casablanca, Morocco
* periods are used between sentences not commas; and make one letter space after commas or periods not before.
* ( I ) is always capital
* add ( to ) after want = want to improve
My name is Hafsa. I'm 13 years old, from Morocco. I live in Casablanca and I want to improve my English.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
My name is hafsa , I'm 13 years old, from morocco, i live in casablanca and i want improve my english .
Corrections are just grammatically. your English is nice.
* Names always start with capital letters = Hafsa, Casablanca, Morocco
* periods are used between sentences not commas; and make one letter space after commas or periods not before.
* ( I ) is always capital
My name is Hafsa. I'm 13 years old, from Morocco. I live in Casablanca and I want improve my English .
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