Hello.
Hello my dear friends,
I'll write something about my life and you, if it isn't hard to you, correct my mistakes, please.=)
My name is Allie, I have wrote it earlier...so I'm university student. I learn English and Japanese now. I like to travel, but I think that everybody likes it, cuz what can be better, than visiting other countries, find a new friends, know something new.
Two days ago I was at a 'Limp Bizkit' concert and it was awesome!!!
I was listening to 'Limp Bizkit' when I was 12 years old...Now I'm 19, but they still so cool. It's a great band!!! (>_<)
Today, all day long I was listening to their albums. It's like a affective state after a amazing show. lol
I wish to visit 'Three Days Grace' concert someday. I'm a big fan of theirs.^^
Tomorrow I have an exam at University, I hope always gonna be ok.
and I really hope that here is, at my notebook, you'll find a little mistakes.)
Thank you.^
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Hello.
Hello my dear friends,
I'll write something about my life and you, if it isn't hard to for you, correct my mistakes, please.=)
My name is Allie, I have wrote written it earlier...so I'm a university student. I am learning English and Japanese now. I like to travel, but I think that everybody likes it, cuz what can be better, than visiting other countries, finding a new friends, knowing (learning would sound better) something new.
Two days ago I was at a 'Limp Bizkit' concert and it was awesome!!!
I was listening to 'Limp Bizkit' when I was 12 years old...Now I'm 19, but they are still so cool. It's a great band!!! (>_Today, all day long I was listening to their albums. It's like an affective state after an amazing show. lol
I wish to visit 'Three Days Grace' concert someday. I'm a big fan of theirs.^^
Tomorrow I have an exam at University, I hope I'm always gonna be ok.
and I really hope that here is, at in my notebook, you'll find a little few mistakes.)
Thank you.^
You did a nice job!
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Hello.
Hello my dear friends,
I'll write something about my life and you, if it isn't hard to you, correct my mistakes, please.=)
My name is Allie, I have wrote it earlier...so I'm university student. I am learning English and Japanese now. I like to travel, but I think that everybody likes it, cuz what can be better, than visiting other countries, find a new friends and to know or learn something new.
Two days ago I was at a 'Limp Bizkit' concert and it was awesome!!!
I am listening to 'Limp Bizkit' since I was 12 years old...Now I'm 19, but still they are so cool. It's a great band!!! (>_Today, all day long I was listening to their albums. It's like an affective state after a amazing show. lol
I wish to attend 'Three Days Grace' concert someday. I'm a big fan of their.^^
Tomorrow I have an exam at University, I hope it always gonna be ok.
and I really hope that in my notebook, you'll find a little mistakes.)
Thank you.^
Well done..keep working hard on your English.Njoy
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I'm glad to hear that!I recommend you a song "re re "of asian kung-fu generation .do you have lessons of Japanese at school?I've ever been to Singapore and Malaysia.I want to visit Russia and England!
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Yeah)One ok rock is really cool!!! yes,I know this band -"asian kung-fu generation ".
I heard some of their songs. good band=)
I wasn't in Japan) maybe in the future.^^ when my Japanese become better I will visit Japan)
What about you?Have you ever been somewhere , in other countries?
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One ok rock良いね！＼(^o^)／日本だとasian kung-fu generation とか[champagne ]が好きかな。
One ok rock is cool! I like asian kung-fu generationand [champagne] ,for example .
日本行ったことあるの？have you ever been to Japan?
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