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Talking with my foreign friend! The other day ,I chatted with my first Korean friend on Skype,which made me pretty happy. I'm a person intrested in languages.Despite the fact that I have been learning English for many years, I have few chances to speak it with native speakers or people from any other foreign countris. The first time I have spoken to foreigners was when I was on a bus where I met two Amerians who came to our prefecture to learn the Miao language.We only chatted for a short time,though,we were very glad to meet each other. My Korean friend and I met on italki,where we got to know each other and exchanged some information of each other. Finally, we chatted online via skype. Thanks to italki and skype, I met such a good friend who is handsome easygoing,and outstanding.His kindness impressed me deeply.I hope we can meet in Beijing or Seoul someday! In a word, I really appreciate it that I have made friends with him whoes lovely laughter I will never forget!

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Talking with my foreign friend!

The other day,-I chatted with my first Korean friend on Skype,-which made me pretty happy.
I'm a person intrested in languages.-Despite the fact that I have been learning English for many years, I have few chances little chance to speak it with native speakers or people from any other foreign countries. The first time I have spoken spoke to with foreigners, was when I was on a bus where I met two Americans who came to our prefecture to learn the Miao language.-We only chatted for a short time,-though we were very glad to meet each other.
My Korean friend and I met on italki,-where we got to know each other and exchanged some information of each other. Finally, we chatted online via skype. Thanks to italki and skype, I met such a good friend who is handsome, easygoing and outstanding.-His kindness impressed me deeply.-I hope we can meet in Beijing or Seoul someday!
In a word, I really appreciate it that I have made friends with him whoes whose lovely laughter I will never forget!

 

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Brilliant english though. Keep it up!

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写得还不错啊,错误基本上Jenna都指出来了

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