helen's notebook entry: Aug 18, 2010
Yesterday i felt very sad.My computer was broken,the screen appeared several lines.So i told to my friend who broke it,but she reacted nothing,just said sorry.I was surprised about her response.I remembered that she had promised if the computer stopped working she would help me repair it next time,and it's her who ruined it.So i was angry.Ithink she must give me a explain.
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helen's notebook entry: Aug 18, 2010
Yesterday i felt very sad.My computer was broken,the screen appeared several lines(The screen appeared only several times or several lines appeared on the screen?))).So i told to(tell somebody something, never use to after tell!) my friend who broke(had broken is better) it,but she reacted nothing(well, simply she didn't react),just said sorry(that she was sorry).I was surprised about her response(reaction, her reaction surprised me).I remembered that she had promised if the computer stopped working she would help me (to) repair it next time,and it's her who ruined it.So i was angry.I think she must give me a explain(explanation).Cheer up!
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Hi,Helen when i read ur tragedy i feel very bad. I think ur friends those who not care u & ur material
then they r not able ur friendship. ok bye & take care
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