Today is monthly paid hoilday.

Of course, I got up later than on routine days and rapidly/quickly ate the breakfast (why rapidly?).
I walked to the lake, which located next to my house, for a change.
I was happy because of the fresh air. And Then I went drove to the auto repair shop to have my car repaired my car. There were many problems with my car, more than i've I had thought. It took 3 hours, and I was boreding. As soon as finish the work was finished, I drove to meet my friends and had a lunch. We discussed why hyundai or kia motorcars are more so expensive than foreign country. We made had many complaints criticisms, but anyway went for a drink.

Today is a monthly paid hoilday.

Of course, I got up later than rotine days (than usual) and rapidly ate the (my) breakfast.
I walked (around) the lake, which is located next to my house for a change (I recommend putting "for a change" in the begining of the sentence and not in the end).
I was happy to breath a bit of because of the fresh air. And then I went to the auto repair shop to repair my car. There were many (a lot more)problem with my car more than i've thought. It took 3 hours. I was boring(ed). As soon as I finishED the work, i met with my friends and we had a lunch together. We discussed why hyunde or kia motors are so expansive than foreign country( What would you like to say here: That hyundae are more expensive abroad than at home? Or that hyndae cars are more expensive than cars of the foreign brands?). We made many complants (we complained to each other) and went for a drink.

ps. "Make a complaint" means sending/filing, making an offician complaint. But when you are with friends you simply "complain".

Hope this helps! 

Today is a monthly paid hoilday.

Of course, I got up later than on routine days and rapidly ate the breakfast.
I walked to the lake which is located next to my house for a change of pace.
I was happy because of the fresh air. And then I went to the auto repair shop to repair my car. There were many problems with my car, more than I'd thought. It took 3 hours. I was bored, As soon as I finished the work, I met my friends and had a lunch. We discussed why hyundai or kia motors is more expensive than in foreign countries. We made many complants and went for a drink.

The correction is right if you fixed the car.