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A green forest and orchard's trip 1 There is a green forest in Binh Duong province. Some said they did not believe a forest exist in there. I did too. However I saw it last week. Its about 64 km from my current place, not too far much unless losing way. We are a group of 18 young and old people taking that trip on last weekend. We started at 8:30 in the round about of Binh Phuoc by motorbike and arrived a local market at 10:30. We were there over an hour for preventing from heavy rain. It seemed to waste our time.. but its not bad at all as a group member said a good time for "Watching falling rain" that we seldom do in the big city with a busy life. We passed so many mud road and asked local people to get a direction. After all, We came an orchard. The honest owner welcomed us at a gate of his house with smiling face, too warm. He also cared of a boy who had a accident during trip and took care of him.

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A green forest and a  trip to an orchard 1

There is a green forest in Binh Duong province. Some said they did not believe a forest existed there. I did too. However, last week I saw it last week.
It's about 64 km from my current place, not too far much unless you get lost on the way. We were a group of 18 young and old people who took that trip on last weekend.
We started by motorbike from the Binh Phuoc roundabout at 08.30 and arrived at local market at 10:30. We were there for over an hour, sheltering from heavy rain. It felt ike a waste of our time.. but it wasn't bad at all as a group member said it was a good time for "Watching falling rain", which we seldom do in the big city with a busy life. 

We passed so many mud roads and asked local people to get some directions. Eventually, We came to an orchard. The honest owner welcomed us very warmly with a smiling face at the gate to his house. He was also concerned about a boy who had an accident during the trip and took care of him.

Good writing, nguyenan. You need to consider the word order of your sentences very carefully.  

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