My Health (My Accident?)

I fainted in the shower yesterday evening, I was dazed, but still conscious. I used faint voice called my sister. She answered me and then came in a hurry and sat down beside me. After she had looked at my face she gave me a hot cup of sugar-water to drink. I felt my stomach ache had gradually fading. She took me with her and walked slowly into my bedroom, laying me on the bed to let me rest.

When I was woke up in the morning, I have ate some hot cornmeal porridge. I knew the that stomach ache is an old weakness of mine, so I need to take better care of myself.

Since in the last time I went to the hospital until the day before yesterday (this period of optimism only for 4 months time my stomach hurts had not attacked me.)

Therefore, I will try to follow a diet plan to stay healthy in the future.

The light-blue sentence: Im not sure what you want to say there.

I hope you feel better now!

// 瑞

The Health

I was fall in a faint in shower room yesterday evening.

Yesterday evening, I fainted in the bathroom/shower.

昨天晚上，我在厕所晕倒。

When I was a little bit consciousness, i used faint voice called my sister ,

When I gained consciousness, I faintly called out to my sister.

She answered me and then hurried come went to my side.

after she watched in my face she gave me a hot cup of sugar water to drank.

After looking at my face, she gave me a cup of hot sugar water to drink.

i felt my stomachache had gradually faded.

I felt my stomache ache gradually fade.

People "look at" other people's faces.  They do not "watch" other people's faces.

看他的脸 = Look at his face

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