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My key resposibilities in the workspace May be It will be interesting for somebody, I hope. Thank you for read this. Please correct me. My ke responsibilities in my workspace are: an analysis of current global financial markets indicators (the major stock indexes, futures for them, quotes of world currency pairs, forward contracts on them, government and corporate bonds, quotes of credit default swaps on them, the major commodity futures quotes), the analysis of macroeconomic statistic data, analysis of companies reporting, development of own analyze systems with VBA in MS Excel with the setup of online communication and updates between the Bloomberg Terminal and MS Excel, making recommendations on specific investment ideas, the selection of particular financial instruments for the portfolio, monitoring the execution of strategies, full control of portfolio (asset allocation, risks, reviewing positions, Sharpe and Sortino ratios etc.)

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My key resposibilities in the workspace

Maybe It will be interesting for somebody, I hope. Thank you for reading this. Please correct me.
My key responsibilities in my workspace are: to analyze current global financial market indicators (the major stock indexes, their future, quotes of world currency pairs and forward contracts on them, government and corporate bonds, quotes of credit default swaps on them, the future major commodity  quotes), to analyze macroeconomic statistic data, to analyze companies reporting, to develop our analysis systems with VBA in MS Excel with the setup of online communication and updates between the Bloomberg Terminal and MS Excel, to make recommendations on specific investment ideas, to select particular financial instruments for the portfolio, to monitor the execution of strategies, and control the portfolio (asset allocation, risks, reviewing positions, Sharpe and Sortino ratios etc.)


Conversationally, this would be fine, but I changed the conjugation of most of the listes words to be technically correct.
you started the list with "my responsibilities are..an analysis" (this is an object not action/ability). Each listed item has to be correct with the original action "my responsibilities are...making recomendations" (in a sentence you would rather say TO make recomendations).
ex "My job at work is to clean lab-ware, script data notes, check the equipment and storage levels, and run machines.
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