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who can check this for me, i'm waitting right now! You’d tell me about your ironstone business since last year, but it’s seemed not work well. I’m worried about that you will give me ironstone as rent to me at last. At the same time, you always promise me 6 month rent and additional amount payment for covering the inconvenience, despite I’d heard many times, you never check it.

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who can check this for me, i'm waitting right now!

Hello, Kevin. A MINIMAL revision (i.e., a way to make your text more or less grammatical in English) is this:

You’d tell have been telling me about your ironstone business since last year, but it’s seemed it does not seem to have been working too well. I’m worried about the possibility that you will/may still give me ironstone as rent to me at last. At the same time, you always promise me 6 months' rent and additional amount payment for covering the inconveniences, but, despite although  I ’d have heard that story many times, you never check it fulfil your promise.
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who can check this for me, i'm waitting right now!

You’d tell me about your ironstone business since last year, but it  seems not work well. I’m worried about that you will giveironstone  me as rent  at last. At the same time, you always promise me 6 month rent and additional amount payment for covering the inconvenience, despite I’d heard many times, you never check it.

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