A Chinese Dynasty that I Most Admired  (应该用现在时吧)

I come from China and like the particular Chinese history(why to modify Chinese History by using "particular"? Don't you mean "you like Chinese History particularly"?). The Chinese dynasty that I most admired is Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period which was a colorful age before Chin Dynasty and which is often called the Big Golden Period by many historians. Almost all of the precious philosophy originated from this period (in that period) such as Confucianism, Taoism, Legalism, Mohism, etc. I am always excited as soon as I think of the scene of Contention of A Hundred Schools of Thought. That was a passionate era in which Chinese people were full of creative thoughts and uncomparable courage. In my view, the most important point that could be used to evaluate any (an不定冠词泛指) epoch should be the valuable philosophical thoughts that this period can bring (which can be brought) to its descendants, even to all humans. 

All sorts of these ideas emerged in Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period that made tremendous effects to later China and made Chinese Chinese. Every following dynasty including Chin Dynasty, Han Dynasty, Tang Dynasty and Sung Dynasty even today cannot jump out of the hedge, although they could also bring to the world huge contributions(bring the world huge contributions or bring huge contributions to the world, either is ok). The most percious asset (该词是否更偏重经济上的“资产”之意？用treasure or wealth可否？)for humans is their particular thoughts which could also be the reason of culture forming, custom, languages, rules and so on in different races (which could also be  fundamental for forming different cultures, customs, languages and rules among races). So, the most admired dynasty for me in China is the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, and I (am) willing(It's an adj) to spend my time to do (spend time in doing) some researches （research当研究讲，不可数）about it.

很久没有写过了，很多我也不确定。跟着感觉改的，仅供参考。