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Beautiful sunset! Yesterday evening a very dear friend of mine called and invited me to go for a walk. We haven't seen each other in a while so I just couldn't wate to see her. Our destination wasn't too far from my home...The Bothanical Garden. Once we were in, we chose a not so travelled path, admiring the beauty around us. Ahead of us was a clear, blue sky, behind us a grey, heavy sky...the rain was coming and we had no umbrella with us but we didn't care...all that we wanted was to find the perfect place to see the sunset. While we were wandering on that small path we got scared by a dog, got stung by some bushes and walked on muddy soil ... but we were only smiling and talking, with a big smile on our face. And all of a sudden it started to rain...it was one of those beatiful summer rains, where the sun is still shining in the sky and it makes you feel so unreal...we could see the rain drops shining in the sun and the bugs were all looking for a place to hide, just like us. ^_^ And finally, we have found the perfect spot to admire the beauty that was in front of us...on the hill above the lake were some young trees and the grass was so tall that when we sat down we were all surrounded by it...it was only us, in our oasis of silence...by the time we made ourselves comfortable the rain stopped and all the birds started to sing again. Another beauty that we have seen on the sky behind us was a big, beautiful rainbow...it had all the colours so vivid, you could clearly see them...and I had that moment when I wasn't sure where I should look...at the beautiful rainbow behind me or at the sun that was now rushing to hide.. We just sat there for more than an hour, admiring the sun that was slowly going down, to hide behind he hill in front of us...and the clouds that were on the sky made this sunset be more than beautiful, making us thing at the beauty of creation, at a creative God and at small us... I hope I will see other sunsets with my friends this summer, many others just as beautiful as this one...!

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Beautiful Sunset!

Yesterday evening a very dear friend of mine called and invited me to go for a walk. We hadn't seen each other in a while so I just couldn't wait to see her. Our destination wasn't too far from my home...The Bothanical Garden. Once we were in, we chose a not so travelled path, admiring the beauty around us. Ahead of us was a clear, blue sky, behind us a grey, heavy sky...the rain was coming and we had no umbrella with us but we didn't care.... All that we wanted was to find the perfect place to see the sunset.

While we were wandering on that small path we got scared by a dog, got stung by some bushes and walked on muddy soil ... but we were only smiling and talking, with a big smiles on our faces. And all of a sudden it started to rain...it was one of those beatiful summer rains, where the sun is still shining in the sky and it makes you feel so unreal.... We could see the rain drops shining in the sun and the bugs were all looking for a place to hide, just like us. ^_^ And Finally, we have found the perfect spot to admire the beauty that was in front of us. On the hill above the lake were some young trees and the grass was so tall that when we sat down we were all surrounded by it. It was only us, in our oasis of silence. By the time we made ourselves comfortable the rain had stopped and all the birds started to sing again. Another beauty that we saw in have seen on the sky behind us was a big, beautiful rainbow. All the colours were so vivid, you could clearly see them...and at I had that moment when I wasn't sure where I should look, at the beautiful rainbow behind me or at the sun that was now rushing to hide.

 We just sat there for more than an hour, admiring the sun that was slowly going down, to hide behind the hill in front of us. The clouds that were in the sky made this sunset be more than beautiful, making us think of the beauty of creation, and of a creative God and a small us. 

I hope I will see many other sunsets with my friends this summer, just as beautiful as this one!

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haha, I just wrote an essay about sunset too, and I posted a photo there, maybe we took it at the same time.
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I love sunset, and I love the way you describe it! lol
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wow,it's beautiful.In the summer ,the temperature is very high.
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Eehhh, lucky you! :) That's a stroll worth envying :P

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