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My 2012
I remember I watched a film named "2012". At that time, I thought we still have a long time from the doomsday. Who knows 2012 has is come coming very soon without even preparation preparing or thinking(a subject maybe "about it"). This year, I have to welcome the 3rd "0" third zero in my life even if I do not want to. The news In 2012, I was became a short hair girl from a long wave hair girl I changed my hairstyle in 2012, from long and wavy hair to a short hairstyle. Now I am a girl who with a mushroom hair. now I enjoy quiet and privacy instead of hustle and bustle, no surprise! But I am still busy everyday even I donot do not even know why.
I am sure I like busy would rather be busy because it's really better than being bored. It's amazing how the day fills up. I often wonder to be absolutely honest.
I hope one day something changes in my life.
Comments:
You need to work with sentece structures.
When starting a new sentece you need to capitalize the first letter.
No space before the period. The space is after the period and before the new sentence. Same rule applied with commas.
You missed some periods in the end.
The rule for numbers: You need to write it out if it's less than 100.
Good luck!~
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