졸려... 에휴~
엄...
나 졸려.. ㅠㅠ 심심해...
어제, 학교 안 갔어. 그러나, 나 친구를 만났어! 쇼핑 갔어. ㅋㅋㅋ우리 재미 했어.
오늘도 재미가 없었어. 나 자고 싶었어... 그러나, 학교 갔어. 싫어.
나 지금 너무 피곤해... 좋은밤! 굿나잇~ ㅋㅋㅋ
(잘자요 굿나잇 - 비원에이포 / B1A4 ;;;;;;; 정말 좋아! <3)
-켄지 / 아민
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Hi Kenzii.
Thak you for the correction in my writing and I'll give you some tips on your Korean this time :)
I hope you'd like it. :)
어제 학교 안 갔어. (Very Good)
그러나 나 친구를 만났어! (Good. but, the subject '나' could be left out to be more natural)
쇼핑갔어. (Good)
우리 재미 했어 (Incorrect. Should be '우리 재미있었어'. You made just a small mistake but I think you already know about it, don't you? )
오늘도 재미가 없었어. (Very Good)
나 자고 싶었어. (Good)
그러나, 학교 갔어. 싫어. (Good. but '싫어' sounds a little awkward in this sentence. If you mean 'you went to school, but you didn't enjoy things there', then 그러나 학교에 갔지만 싫었어 / 그러나 학교에 갔지만 좋지 않았어 would be more fine.)
* ~ㅆ지만 means "(you) did something but (you are/were/will be/do/did/will do... something)
Good job, Kenzii
Gongratulations.
and 잘자요 굿나잇~
(I know you are a big fan of 비원에이포, aren't you?)
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