true friendship ( especially female) it is real fact or only fiction?
i m 20 and i dont believe in true friendship anymore.
why people betray u whom you love, respect and always ready to help them? why they do it? why they do soo hurt the person who loves them so much? this is so cruel!!
It is soo hard for me to understand that the person isnt trying to spend time with me and dont appreciate me as i appreciate him, that he doesnt need me any more.
why people cant understand that the person isnt a toy that can be discarded when it is boring for you?
i m so sad when i write about it(((
People, be humane, appreciate those who really loves you!!!
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True friendship (especially female): is it real fact or only fiction?
I'm twenty and I don't believe in true friendship anymore. Why people betray u whom you those they love, respect and always ready to help them would do anything for? Why do they do it? Why they do soo hurt the person who loves them so much? this It is so cruel!!
It is soo hard for me to understand that this person isn't trying to spend time with me, and doesn't appreciate me as I appreciate him, and that he doesn't need me anymore.
Why can't people understand that the person isnt a toy people aren't toys that can be discarded when it is boring for you you're bored?
I'm so sad when I write about it. (((
People, be humane, and appreciate those who really loves you!!!
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I agree with you, Kevin .Friends must be checked the time!
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I think people use the words friend, true friend, love, a little too easily. I can count my true friends on one hand. I agree with Eduardo and it may take years.
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In my experience, the true friendship exist, but is not "abundant". For this reason i try to don't lost the very few people that i can call "friend". And other thing, you need many years for know someone and call him/her a true friendship...
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Oops. I overlooked a few mistakes and forgot to explain my corrections. Sorry!
Why do people betray those they love, respect and would do anything for?
Why do they hurt the person who loves them so much?
Explanation of corrections:
>> Always spell out words less than 100 in your writing.
>> Always capitalize the first letter of every sentence.
>> Always capitalize the personal pronoun "I."
>> The contraction of "I am" is "I'm"; you can't omit the apostrophe!
Question -> statement
Why do people betray others? -> People (do) betray others.
Why can't they? -> They can't.
Why don't they? -> They don't.
Pay close attention to the word order of questions versus statements. In questions, the verb moves in front of the noun.
I hope this helps. Let me know if you have any questions!
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