a little sad
today was mizzle,i still got up early for work.I dont know what any reasons,only felt a little sad,maybe recent work pressure or lost a friend,I couldnt find a close friend to talk.Today suddently i felt lonely and afraid.Now only leave me here alone,friends are all leaving for another city or another new life.Even,my brother also run to shanghai for his study.
Er....i hope sun rises quickly and shine into my heart,give me some warm and makes me smile again.Forget everything bad things----life is flying away,i am going on growing up too.
Happy,happy,and more.
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I had to look up the definition of mizzle (and I am a American English speaker!): midway between mist and drizzle. I suspect this is Brit speak.
A few comments: It is generally considered poor form to end a sentence with a preposition. (to/with). Punctuation counts! Capitalize first word in sentence, title words, "I", proper nouns (Shanghai). I think texting has made learning proper English very difficult. For example, many of my Chinese friends don't know "wanna" is not a word.
Anyway, hope you feel better by now.
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a little sad
today was mizzle(我不知道mizzle是什麽), but i still got up early for work. I'm not sure why, but I felt a little sad - maybe recent work pressure or a loss of a friend got to me, I couldnt find a close friend to talk to/with. Today, I suddenly felt lonely and afraid. I feel left here alone, with friends leaving for different cities and starting new lives. Even my brother is running off to Shanghai for school. (用even和also在一個句子內有點重複) Ugh ("er"聽起來你很混淆，不難過)....i hope the sun rises quickly and shines onto my heart, giving me warmth and making me smile again. I want to forget all the bad things---Life is flying by, and i am growing up too.
Happy,happy,and more. (<--我不知道這句話要表達什麽)
你不要那麼難過，我們都要度過這些生活的階段。你堅持住吧
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You have to learn to stand alone. Unfortunately we live in a capitalistic world. Thats means that the people have no feelings anymore and are just like machines working hard for some few politicians and industrial company bosses. It is important for you to learn that you can go also alone. There is no other chance. You will see that you can do many things alone and even have fun alone. So don't worry.
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