About myself
My name is Luis. I studied business management at the University of Almeria . I worked 3 years in an insurance company as accountant.
I am very responsible and I think I have good organizational skills. I enjoy working in a team environment, and I get along well with others. I am fast learner and I pay attention for details. I'm willing to learn and help others.
Can anyone correct this text please? And any suggestion about my pronuntiation??
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About myself
My name is Luis. I studied business management at the University of Almeria . I worked for 3 years in an insurance company as an accountant.
I am very responsible and I think I have good organizational skills. I enjoy working in a team environment, and I get along well with others. I am a fast learner and I pay attention to details. I'm willing to learn and help others.
Can anyone correct this text please? And any suggestion about my pronunciation?
Yo que sepa se escribe organizational, organize, organized, etc. No lo he visto escrito con S "organisational." Lo busque en el diccionario por que hasta por un momento dude, pero no, si es con Z.
Me parece que hiciste un buen trabajo y te das a entender bien. Como te explico? Osea suena como alguien que habla/piensa en Ingles y no simplemente traduciendo de Espanol a Ingles. Me entiendes?
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Thanks Casey :)
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sorry, also just noticed this:
... worked 'for' 3 years in an insurance company as 'an' accountant.
You missed out the determiner.
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Here it is with a few corrections:
My name is Luis. I studied business management at the University of Almeria . I worked 'for' 3 years in an insurance company as accountant.
I am very responsible and I think I have good 'organisational' skills (English spelling). I enjoy working in a team environment, and I get along well with others. I am 'a' fast learner and I pay attention 'to detail'. I'm willing to learn and help others.
I have put the corrections in ' '
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Luis.Oh we are peers.I was doing accounting.But I no you sick.You are an accountant.
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