My foreign partners
Two Canadians come to my company last week, one is a senior technical advisor, and another one is a software & database analyst. They both are the staff of the NeoSeis Technology Group, which located in Calgary, Alberta, Canada. A Chinese Canadian comes with them.
We companies have a Joint Project. We are the first party and they are the second party. They develop software for us and we pay them money. They come here for the sign off meeting about the project.
In the noon, I asked them what do you want to eat. They said the simpler, the better. So, I invited them to eat Wu Dalang baked wheat cake and Pan Jinlian pickles in Xicheng hotel.
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Two Canadians come came to my company last week, one is a senior technical advisor, and another one is a software & database analyst. They both are the staff of the NeoSeis Technology Group, which is located in Calgary, Alberta, Canada. A Chinese-Canadian comes came with them.
We companies have a Joint Project. We are the first party and they are the second party. They develop software for us and we pay them money. They come here for the sign off meeting about the project.
In the noon, I asked them what do you want to eat. They said the simpler, the better. So, I invited them to eat Wu Dalang baked wheat cake and Pan Jinlian pickles in Xicheng hotel.
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cMy foreign partners
Two Canadians come to my company last week, one is a senior technical advisor, and another one is a software & database analyst. They both are the staff of the NeoSeis Technology Group, which located in Calgary, Alberta, Canada. A Chinese Canadian comes with them.
Whereby our companies have a Joint Project. We are the first party and they are the second party. They develop software for us and we pay them money. They come here for the sign off meeting about the project.
At lunch time, I asked them what do you want to have for lunch. They said the simpler, the better. So, I invited them to eat Wu Dalang baked wheat cake and Pan Jinlian pickles in Xicheng hotel.
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Oh, and it would've also been better to say "At noon" rather than "In the noon."
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I'm unsure if you can use the tenses that you did when paraphrasing. It probably would've been better to say, "I asked them what they wanted to eat."
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