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introduce yourself
Hello, everyone,
I'm Canny, from China. My native language is Chinese. now, I'm living in Shenzhen, the most southern city of in China. The climate here is always hot, summer and winter alike. Anyway whatever, I'm learning English now, but my English is really so poor, so maybe you u would like to help me. Let us be a language exchange partners.
Excellent! Some very good sentences there, you just need to work on punctuation and capitalisation to reach a high standard.
introduce yourself
Hello,everyone!I'm Canny,from China. My native language is Chinese. Now I'm living in Shenzhen,the a southern city of China.The climate here is always hot,and summer and winter are alike.Whatever,I'm learning English now,but and my English is really so poor,so maybe u you would like to help me. Let us be a language exchange partners.
Pay attention to the Capitalization.
introduce yourself
hello,everyone,i'm canny,from china,my native language is chinese,now,i living in shenzhen,the southern city of china,the climate here is always hot,summer and winter alike.whatever,i'm learning english now,but my english is really so poor,so maybe u would like to help me,let us be a language exchange partners.
hello everyone! I'm canny from china, my native language is Chinese. Now, I am living in Shenzhen, the southern city of china, the climate here is always hot, summer and winter alike. whatever, I'm learning English now, but it is really so poor, so maybe you would like to help me, let us be a language exchange partner.
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