correct me please
Tomorrow will be my bright day.
No way to say bad days,
They are ran away.
I see, I hear, since I can respire.
It`s the time to start to inspire
As a new point, I feel me
Reading it as the new me
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Tomorrow will be my bright day.
No way to say bad days, I'm not exactly sure what you mean here.
They are ran away. You may want to say: "They have run away."
I see, I hear, since I can respire.
It's the time to start to inspire
As a new point, I feel me
Reading it as the new me
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