My first notebook entry - Introducing myself

Hi everyone!!! My name is Dania and I am from Syria. My English is very bad and i would like to improve it. At the same time, I'm looking for new friends. Please help me improve my English. Thank you ◠‿◠

As above, your English is understandable and just needs more practise. I've corrected what i thought would be more appropriate as well as highlighted in pink any mistakes that you have made. 

My first notebook entry - Introducing myself

Hi everyone!!! My name is Dania , I am from Syria ..my English is very bad and I want to make my English better, and at the same time, I'm looking for new friends ... My English is not very good and I want to improve it. If you would?!! Please help me!!! Thank you ◠‿◠

Your English is very good, maybe minor changes would make you sound more native but to me it is perfectly understandable. I only corrected part that I think would suit better. I am not native but here is my source for correcting: http://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/if+you+please