Convenience Stores
寫作提示:第一段中寫出便利商店帶給我們的好處。第二段中請討論便利商店可能擁有的負面論點後再總結你是否認為城市應該有或沒有24小時的便利商店。
Convenience Stores
The benefits convenience stores bring to me is more than I can imagine. In the middle of the night, when I am hungry, I don't need to worry about where I can buy food because the nearby 24-hour convenience stores can help me. Also, it is a convenient place to let us pay for our bill, buy ticket and send package…etc. How convenient it is!
However, the convenience stores do more than their job. The traditional stores can't be their rivals so they drive the small stores out of business. The convenience stores have monopolized the market, and raise the price to earn more profits. To me, I can't live without convenience stores, which is a little pathetic. I know that they earn lots of money from us, but it's a trend we can't stop. I hope the big company can do their social responsibility much harder to help the traditional stores, cooperate with each other and make everyone in this society can live happier than before.
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Thanks to give me a new idea~
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Sorry for speaking wrong at the last sentence"shortcoming is that may not have something what I want". So perhaps It is good in city.
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I think about "them"-->is not totally a company. They just unite for goods and policy that could reduce coast. Store owner still are not able earn money if they choose a bad position.
And I think it is not everthing, They had bee offering social responsibility for serving you by attracting you entering there. I think it comes from traditional stores. The store owner are willing to do that also. that is why you can not see traditional stores now.
shortcoming that may what I want. Such as I know it is not everthing.
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