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company Our company's HQ is located another country. Korea is the 5 biggest market in the world and USA, China, Japan and German place upper us. We are proud of this fact because our market size is smaller than other high ranking countries. But the problem is that HQ aren't interested in Korea agency opinion. Actually, Korea customers are sensitive about technology and design of products so they want to have upgraded equitment and program every year. However, HQ dosen't invest their expenses in sw improvement to be satisfied with Korea cutomers. When we get a bidding for public organization contracts, we can't be involve in it. Since our product specifications don't meet the their minimum requirement. As a result, we are behind of competition and our market is getting smaller. To solve this difficulty, we always ask HQ for developing programs. But they pay attention to hear our request at first, but finally, they said " Other bigger markets don't demand fast upgraded program and have any complain about that. But why do you ask me?" Well, we don't know the reason why they don't request for it. But we only know our products sales decrease signifcantly. We hope HQ opens the mind and look at the fast change in our business fields. I think their gold season will be keep going constantly. Because although they don't have any effort to develope products, products still appear to public. I'm really worry about our company futures and hope to hear our voice before it is too late.

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Our company's HQ is located in another country. (You should state the name of the country.)

 
Korea is the 5th biggest marketer in the world. and The USA, China, Japan and Germany place upper higher than us. We are proud of this fact because our market size is smaller than other high ranking countries.

But the problem is that the HQ aren't isn't interested in the Korean agency's opinion.

 
Actually, Korean customers are sensitive about the technology and design of products, so they want to have upgraded equiptment and programs every year.
However, the HQ dosen't invest their expenses in sw (<< ?) improvement to be satisfy with Korean customers.

When we get a bidding for public organization contracts, we can't be involved in it.,since our product specifications don't meet the their (the and their are both fine to use. Just don't use both.) minimum requirement.
As a result, we are behind of in competition and our market is getting smaller.
To solve this difficulty (problem), we always ask the HQ for developing programs.
But At first, they pay attention to hear our request at first, but finally, they say
"Other bigger markets don't demand fast upgraded programs and don't have any complains about that. But, why do you ask me us?"
Well, we don't know the reason why they don't request for it. But we only know our products sales decrease signifcantly.

We hope the HQ opens their mind and looks at the fast change in our business fields. I think their gold season will be keep going constantly. Because although they don't have any effort to develope products, the products will still continue to appear to the public.

I'm really worried about our company's futures and hope to hear our voice our voice will be heard before it's too late.

 

:)

 

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