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Algeria flagnesrine4620
life miserbale or a fairy tail anyone can start his own story by once upon a time but some don't want to they cant start it by in a near time lived.......... every one in this world has his story but some how he lived it every day why i don't know perhaps to lear from life to realize what are our mistakes and correct it to not repeat it well we cxan fight our destiny and some times he just follow us in every step that we take because that's it we learn we grown we smell we touch ... my readers and frien,s in italki if i have tell me about this poem that i write by myself i open my eyes in fear the sun rises when you save ffrom the dark i close doors and windows without know what's inside dear sun sear wind dear rain give me power to transform to myself again and to save myself from the nothing i've become a cry of a baby gives me hope that the moon will forgive me ps tell me what you think about

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I'm not understanding the message of the poem. However, I admire your courage to share your art with the world. It's not easy!
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Is life miserable, or a fairy tale?

Anyone can start their own story with "once upon a time", but some don't want to. They can't start it with in a "near time lived"..........
Everyone in this world has their own story but for some, how they live life every day, why, I don't know. Perhaps to learn from life, or to realize what our mistakes are and correct them, not torepeat them. Well, we can fight our destiny, and sometimes it just follows us in every step that we take, because that's when we learn, we grow, we smell, we touch...
My readers and friends in italki, tell me what you think about this poem that I wrote.
I open my eyes in fear, 
the sun rises and saves you from the dark. 
I close doors and windows without knowing what's inside. 
Dear sun, dear wind, dear rain, 
give me the power to transform  myself again
and to save myself from the nothingness. 
I've become a baby's crythat gives
me hope that the moon will forgive me. 

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Tell me what you think about it.

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