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A common feat: it is heroic of them, but we always forget this: A common feat: it is heroic of them, but we always forget this: Well, each of us enjoys taking stories about spirited, brave, fearless deeds. We all wanna be like these noble heros - we admire them! Though we've read a lot of books of this subject pointing interesting sights out, we often forget 'every-day' heros. We often forget them. Today I'd like to tell you some about these people, or rather - one person. It is my aunt - she's a doctor. As you probably know, Russian doctors get a small payment... very small. To be a doctor, you should have a great appetite to learning. You should be tender. You should be a master to help not only with medicine, but with an endearing word. I admire my aunt. Yesterday she had a birthday (it was an off-day, too). There were guests, and she was already going to have a nice day... But suddenly somebody has called. It was a hospital worker - there was a difficult child, so my aunt had to go. :( ...we had been waiting for about four hours when she came home - tired, but pleased. 'Pleased' because everything was done. :) Though, her cake has been already eaten, and her wine has been drunken, she was smiling. :) Anyway she's a great doctor! I admire her :)

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Very nice, almost perfect.
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Well, each of us enjoys taking  [[hearing]] stories about spirited

we've read a lot of books of [[on]] this subject

a great appetite to [[for]] learning

her cake has [[had]] been already eaten [[already]]  One should use the 'past perfect' (also called 'pluperfect') tense, because she came home in the past, and her cake was eaten even before that point in the past. But, you probably know that and just didn't notice the error.

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