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My graduate study I make a study of butterfly flapping on the university. Now,I develop a simulator for fluid analyses with Finite Element Method. It's so hard to me.

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My graduate study

I've made a study of butterfly flapping at the university.
Now, I develop a simulator for fluid analyses with Finite Element Method.
It's so hard to me.

 

I am not sure if you still making study on butterfly flapping or not. I predict you do not make study on butterfly anymore. Therefore I putted your first sentence in past.

I used "at" instead "on" the university. This is due pair of 2 words that make phrase: "study at". To "study on" is used for subjects. example: I've made a study on butterfly flapping at the university.

 

I hope that helps. Good luck to you.

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Thank you for correcting my sentence! ”you still making study on butterfly flapping or not.” I am making study on(about) butterfly flapping in the university now.
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My graduate study

I made (or have maybe?) a study about butterfly flapping in the university.
Now,I am developing a simulator for fluid analyses with Finite Element Method.
It's so hard for me.

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