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Can you correct this text please! Hi, How is it going? this has been a long time no write on italki, well the reason from what I'm writing is for seeing how my english has improving, so I hope you can help to correct this text. Lately I've not been really busy, cause in this time I'm looking for a job, so I've keeping doing basically two things: to take classes for learning to drive, this hasn't been difficult at all, in first moment I felt so excited and complicated at the same time cause I thought this would take too many time in learning to know the rules, mecanic and use of the car, like this one is a Science, but I've realiced anyone can learn to drive a car (except the blinds obviously). Besides, I've keeping my mind occupied on going to gym, cause my physiatric doctor recommended it to me due to I suffer of constant pain in the back, from what I've got to work more my muscles from this part. Actually, I got a life really sedentary but fortunately I am thin and I'm really good in eating. Well I hope you didn't get bored reading this text cause I had more ideas to put here. I'd really thank you if you correct this text to measure my english level. Have a great day, see you around, bye!

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Wow, yeah, this has been a long time from I talked to you last time, well I hope we can chat again too, I'm glad you can remember me and I wish you find a job soon and you're doing good. Take care and have luck...see you!
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Hey man how are you doing? Wow, long time no see, it`s like havn`t talked to you for like ages....graduate from the unviersity yet? I`m. I`ve got a graudation ceremoney on july. I saw you wrote this, so I correct this a bit. I`m not a native speaker, but I try my best. I`m being free now, hope we can talk here more. How about exchanging languages? Hah...have a nice day!
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Hi, How is it going? it has been a long time I didn`t write anything on italki. Well the reason for what I'm writing is to see how my english has been improved, so I hope you can help me to correct this text. Lately I`m not really busy, cause I'm looking for a job, so I've kept doing basically two things: taking driving classes, this hasn't been difficult at all, in the begining I felt so excited and complicated at the same time cause I thought this would take too much time learning the rules, mecanic and the use of a car. It is like science, but I've realized anyone is able to learn to drive a car (except for the blinds obviously). Besides, I've keeping my mind occupied on going to gym, cause my physiatric doctor recommended it to me due to I suffer fromconstant pain in the back, from what I've got to work my back muscles more. Actually, I had a life really sedentary but fortunately I am thin and I have a good appetite. Well I hope you didn't get bored reading this text cause I have more ideas to put here. I'd really thank you if you correct this text to measure my english level. Have a great day, see you around, bye!
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Can you correct this text please!

Hi, How is it going? This has been a long time no write

((( I know you can use phrase "long time no seen" but I never spotted phrase "long time no write". I am not sure how familiar that sounds to native English speakers.

I suggest you sentence: This has been a long time without writing on italki )))

 

on italki. Well the reason from what why I'm writing is for to seeing how my English has improved, so I hope you can help (me) to correct this text. Lately I've not been really busy, because in this time I'm looking for a job, so I've been basically keeping doing

((( "I hope you can help me" is my suggestion, without "me" it would work too.

"Cause" is used while writing informal English, "Because" is used for formal one

basically -> different word order, can't really explain why since I am not that much into grammar )))

 

basically two things: to taking driving classes for to learning how to drive. This hasn't been difficult at all, in at first moment I felt so excited and complicated/frustrated at

((( I really wouldn't use word complicated here as there are better words in my opinion )))

 

the same time because I thought this would take too much time in for learning to know remember the rules,

((( When to use much and when to use many? Read here: http://www.learn-english-online.org/Lesson36/Lesson36.htm )))

 

 understand mechanics and use of the car like this one: is a Science. But I've realized anyone can learn to drive a car (except the blind people/visually disabled

((( visually disabled is considered more "political correct", thought I doubt any blind people will protest against being called blind )))

 

obviously). Beside of that, I've been keeping my mind occupied while going to gym, because my physiatric doctor/physiatrist recommended it to me due to I my suffering having constant pain in the back, from what which I've got to from working more with my muscles from at this that part. Actually, I reallygot a spend a lot of my life really sedentary but fortunately I am thin and I'm really good in eating healthy.

((( Good at eating isn't common expression in English as far I know. You may say: I am really eating healthy / I am really eating a lot / I am really eating enough )))

 

Well I hope you didn't haven't got bored while reading this text because I've had more ideas to put here. I'd really thank you if you correct this text to measure my English level. Have a great day, see you around, bye!

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