My routine

Well, my alarm goes off at 6:00 am and I wake up. Sometimes I say... oh five minutes more, just five. Hahaha! after that I get up and take a shower for a few minutes. After that, I dress, and then I go to the kitchen and I eat my breakfast. Generally it is bread toast with jam and butter, and to drink, a milkshake. After that, I brush my teeth and I go to my work. Sometimes I go by subway or sometimes I drive, and it takes 20 or 25 minutes.
When I arrive at my job at 7:30 am I check my e-mail and check the servers. By the way, I'm an IT Engineer. I work 10 hours and 30 minutes and a half hours a day.
Between 6:00 or 6:30 pm, I go back to my home, I take a shower, and I have my dinner while watching TV. I brush my teeth, and finally, I go to bed.
Basically that is my day, sometimes I do something different, like a go to the gym, dine out and things like that.

If you want to give me some tips to improve my grammar please tell me, it's really important for me, really.

Thank you for review my submission.

The main thing I noticed is too many commas where there needs to be periods. Comma rules in English are very complicated (I am often wrong, I know), but generally, when an idea ends you stop the sentence. I think in Spanish sentences tend to run on longer. Good job!

My routine

Well, my alarm starts at 6:00 am and I wake up, sometimes I say... oh five minutes more, just five ahaha, after that I stand up and take a shower for a few minutes, after that, I dress, then I go to the kitchen and I take my breakfast, (more natural: I have breakfast) which is generally toast with jam and butter and to drink, a milkshake, after that, I brush my teeth and I go to my work, sometimes I go on the subway or sometimes I go driving for 20 or 25 minutes.
When I arrive at my job at 7:30 am, I check my e-mail and check the servers. by the way, I'm an IT Engineer. I work 10 hours and 30 minutes a day. (So long!!!) Between 6:00 or 6:30 pm, I go back to my home, (or, "back to my house", I take a shower, after that I take my dinner (or "have dinner") while watching TV, brush my teeth and finally I go to bed.
Basically that is my day, sometimes I have some changes, like I go to the gym, have dinner out and things like that.

If you want to give me a tips for better my grammar please tell me, it's really important for me, it's true.

Thank you for reviewing my submission.