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My Interests
In my free time I enjoy doing simple things like reading, watching a movies or going hang (more common) with friends . I also like travelling, and I everytime I just can I pack my staff stuff and hit the road to visit new places .
Furthermore, I like practicing some sports as soccer, tennis or and jogging. I´ve been almost all my life I've been playing soccar almost all my life, and I must admit I'm quit good at it playing in soccer teams and I must admit I´m quite good at it :)
I will appreciate your corrections or advices to make this text sounds better with differents and more commons expressions.
Thanks Luis
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Muy bien :) seguir practicando !!
My Interests
In my free time I enjoy doing simple things like such as reading, watching a movie or going out with friends. I also like travelling and I everytime I can whenever I get the chance, I pack my staff things/stuff/belongings and hit the road to visit new places.
Furthermore, I like practicsing/playing some sports such as soccer, tennis or jogging. I've been almost all my life playing in soccer teams almost all my life and I must admit I'm quite good at it :)
I will would appreciate your corrections or advices to make this text sounds better with differents and more commons expressions.
Thanks Luis
My Interests
In my free time I enjoy doing simple things like (such as) reading, watching a movie or going out with friends. I also like travelling and I everytime I can I pack my staff stuff and hit the road to visit new places.
Furthermore, I like practicing (playing) some sports such as soccer, tennis or jogging, I´ve been almost all my life playing in soccer teams have been playing in soccer teams all my life and I must admit I´m quite good at it :)
I will appreciate your corrections or advices advice to make this text sounds better with differents and more commons expressions.
Thanks Luis
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Well done. Very good.
Muy bien
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