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be with friends having come back home for one month,i have fun with my friends! they are so cute, and know what i think. we always go to the ktv to sing .it's wonderful, and everyone enjoy the moment.sometimes we go to the beach to enjoy the sea wind, the beautiful views there and having a barbecue! the foods weren't baked very well frequently, but we still feel happy to be together because when time to school it's hard to see each other, for we aren't studying in the same city. i treasure our friendship very much. they are the gifts from god, the angels around me. they will always be there when i need them. thanks to them i feel so happy everyday! and i want to say thank you to be here ,my dear friends!

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Be With Friends

Having come back home for one month, i have fun with my friends! They are so cute,  and know what i think.
We always go to the ktv to sing. It's wonderful, and everyone enjoy the moment. Sometimes we go to the beach to enjoy the sea wind,  the beautiful views there and having a barbecue!  The foods weren't baked very well frequently,  but we still feel happy to be together because when time to school it's hard to see each other,  for we aren't studying in the same city. I treasure our friendship very much. They are the gifts from god,  the angels around me.  They will always be there when i need them.  Thanks to them i feel so happy everyday!  And i want to say thank you to be here, my dear friends!
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Good English - pretty much just the capitals and spaces need correcting. Why don't you rewrite it I I'll look at it again.

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