First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi 

I am learning english because nowadays this language is very useful and almost all the people speak english when they want to comunicate with other cultures that's why Im here I really want to improve my english and be fluent if it is possible.


I feel your entry is more complex.Cluttering of words spoils the beauty of english language so avoid lengthier sentences and concentrate more on simple sentences when you communicate...Here is an example for you

I am learning the universal language english to communicate with different culture.I am here to improve my english.Hope to speak english fulently.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi!
I am learning English because nowadays this language is very useful and almost everybody speaks English when they want to comunicate with other cultures. That's why I'm here; I really want to improve my English and be fluent if it is possible.

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Best of luck to you, Maria! :)

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