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Everyday to me

I am working now ,my job is saler in online . I am now working as an online salesperson. Now I am working as an online salesperson.

Every day I will reply my customer send me the Email. I (reply to)(communicate with) my customers through email.

My English is poor, so my replies are simple.

So I only reply our custmer simple.

But I am a failure, because when I reply to my customers, they don't reply back. (Aww T.T Don't say that!)

I don't think that I'm doing well, because when I replay to my customers, they don't reply back.

but I am fail .becuase when I reply to my customer later ,I can;t received they reply to me .

This month ,I sell product too few/I m sad . This month, I sold too few products. It makes me sad. This month, I didn't sell enough/many products. I'm sad/disappointed.  

My English is poor ,I can;t call my customer.I can;t speak very well.My English is poor. I can't communicate with my customers. I can't speak very well. 

I need do hard working. I need to more confident and encourage I need to work harder. I need more confidence and encouragement. alsdjf

Everyday to me Problem

Now, I am working as an online salesperson. now, my job is saler in online. Every day, I will reply interact with my customers send me the through email. My English is poor. So, whenever I only have to reply/interact with our custmers, I use only a few simple words while writing emails.

I think, I am fail not good at doing this because becuase even if I send them emails, I never get any reply from them. when I reply to my customer later ,I can;t received they reply to me .This month, I sell have sold only a few products till now, too few so I'm disappointed/sad. My English is poor. I can't call my customers. I can't speak very well. I need to do hard work. working. I need to be more confident and courageous. encourage