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Presentation about London - Part 1 Good afternoon, everyone, today, my presentation is about the city London. 3000 years ago, the London area was already home for the English at that time. In the 1st century, the Romans conquered this place and settled down. They named it Londinium. That's the origin of its name. After the 16th century, with the development of the Capitalism, London expanded itself rapidly. London is the capital of England, the biggest city in Europe and one of the four world-class cities together with New York, Paris and Tokyo. In 2012, it will come in front of the world's eyes again, it will be the first city to hold the Olympics for 3times. The Big London consists of the City of London and other 32 autonomous cities. The City of London is the oldest part of the capital and situated on the north bank of the River Thames. London is a very multicultural city and more than 300 languages are used here.

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Presentation about London - Part 1

Good afternoon everyone; today my presentation is about the city of London.
3000 years ago, the London area was already home for the English at that time. (you already mentioned the time) In the 1st century, the Romans conquered this place and settled down. They named it Londinium. That's the origin of its name. After the 16th century, with the development of the Capitalism, London expanded itself rapidly.
London is the capital of England, the biggest city in Europe and one of the four world-class cities together with New York, Paris and Tokyo. In 2012, it will come in front of the world's eyes again as the first city to hold the Olympics for 3 times. The Big London consists of the City of London and other 32 autonomous cities. The City of London is the oldest part of the capital and is situated on the north bank of the River Thames. London is a very multicultural city and more than 300 languages are used here.

Wow, your English is really precise and good. A couple of little corrections, mostly for flow.

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