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☆VOLUNTEER☆ I visited the famous shrine today. The reason why I did so was that I wanted to feel lives of nature and do volunteer of cleaning. Green leaves, the song by birds, historical constructions…I expected them to make me remember how atmosphere nature has. Actually I live in Tokyo, capital of Japan. My apartment is in the metropolis. It is far from nature. Though I usually enjoy my life here, sometimes I want to see and look back on the country scenery. That’s why I went there. The air of nature in the country was very different from one in the city. Though nature attacks us by disasters in some cases, it may be the sign that nature also has something troubles by human. Unfortunately, I saw a little trash which someone threw away in the area of shrine. I was sad and felt the sorrow of nature. I thought I have to be careful for keeping them clean and healthy and I joined the clean volunteer with my friends. That project was successful and we were satisfied with our activity. However, we have to keep this project and keep the promise of protections for nature. While we were cleaning the area, members could get good experience and conversation each other. To gather individual ideas or volunteer activities made me impressed and gave me good experience. I received something like power from nature and other members there. After holidays on Saturday/ Sunday, I have to keep studying in the university. However, this holiday would be good memory and I will be able to be dedicated myself to studying and experimenting because nature gave me a lot of power. I want to join the events or activities of volunteer again~!!!!

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is this meiji jingu?
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This is a very interesting subject Reika, I'm glad and proud that you have devoted yourself to this great cause.
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How did you get such lovely writing for the title?
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☆VOLUNTEER☆

I visited the famous shrine today. The reason why I did so was that I wanted to feel living of nature and do volunteer of cleaning. Green leaves, the song by birds/(bird song), historical constructions…I expected them to make me remember how atmosphere nature has. Actually I live in Tokyo, capital of Japan. My apartment is in the metropolis. It is far from nature. Though I usually enjoy my life here, sometimes I want to see and look back on the country scenery. That’s why I went there.
The air of nature in the country was very different from one in the city. Though nature attacks us by disasters in some cases, it may be the sign that nature also has something troubles by human. Unfortunately, I saw a little trash which someone threw away in the area of shrine. I was sad and felt the sorrow of nature. I thought I have to be careful for keeping them clean and healthy and I joined the clean volunteer with my friends.
That project was successful and we were satisfied with our activity. However, we have to keep this project and keep the promise of protections for nature. While we were cleaning the area, members could get good experience and conversation each other. To gather individual ideas or volunteer activities made me impressed and gave me good experience. I received something like power from nature and other members there.
After holidays on Saturday/ Sunday, I have to keep studying in the university. However, this holiday shall remain good memory and I will be able to be dedicated myself to studying and experimenting because nature gave me a lot of power.
I want to join the events or activities of volunteering again~!!!!

 

Awhh so sweet!!! I hope nature never leaves your heart. It is really something special. Not all people can see and feel that! You should be happy and proud.

Oh and about English...your mistakes are minor. =) Very good!!!! I never seen Japanese person speaking that good English!I am sure you are very good person!

Arigato for sharing this with community =)

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