I am not very good at writing in English, please help me (1)

Some people thought think you will have a successful life if you have university education go to university and a few people do not believe that,there are very few people who disagree with this. I think going to university education has   is beneficial for you but it can make you lose a lot.

In At my senior high school, a lot of student's family was are pretty rich, and most of their parent's never go have not gone to the university but they still have a lot of money, and prefect family relationships. It is undeniable that they can success succeed not only because of their ability but also for because of this special time in China. China have has had reform and changes a lot during this time. For Because of this reason, when those people who have just finish their university program degree already lost thier chance be in a certain business vacancy, my father’s friend is a perfect example. 

A person who was having university education went to university before thought it will be good for their child. Nowadays also this does not seem like a few decades ago. It is a time for technology and science. If you do some research on the international group in all over the world you will figure that out. Most of all CEO were graduated from famous university and most many of them are doctor. In my opinion if you do not equip creativity and higher education you also will have chance to be success but it will be much more difficult than a few decades ago.

Both of them have their own reason but I still believe that because a several number of example shows us today it  is a time for technology, in my opinion I think people should go to university in order to have a successful life.