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security Safety must come first. When I was a child ,my mother repeat it again and again.However, I always foget this when I am lost in sth. Three months ago ,I broke my legs when I walked on the bank of swimming pool. Needless to say ,I had suffered much. All I could do was to lie on the bed counting the time. When I could walk dependly ? Moreover, I was afraid whether I would lose the job. I took the pain reliever every day as the docotor's instruction.Soon, I can could walk with crutches. Then , I can walk without any support. Now ,I come back to week. I must apprecitae my family. Without their help and encouragement, I can not recover so quickly. In the future , I must be careful.

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Your writing is correct. But frist look is chinglish. Use your chinese english way to think in english.I think you took care much about the gramma. So always use the person as subject. Sometimes you neednt care about the gramma and wrong words, just free write something with your english words. even it is wrong, then would help them more coherent and attractive. the methods.But finally you should write correctly and better.

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