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My Friend's Bucket List

A few weeks ago, I heard a shocking bad news of about my friend who's got a has cancer.

He is at the same age of mine as me, so I feltmiserable and sorrowful at the same time.

So, yesterday, I visited my friend in a at the hospital. Before getting going into the room, I couldn't help but imagined how he looks.

Aside from other changes in appearances such as his bald head which has been would be shaped by devastatingly strong anti-cancer medication, what I was mostly have been concerned about was his inanimate and weary eyes.

However, when I stepped into the room and looked at him, precisely his directly in the eyes, I could see him in a whole new light.

He was, at that moment, very energetic. He doesn't didn't seem to be a patient; not even never like a patient who caught a cold.
He said he has become a little calmer since he started fighting with cancer, but he was a still a talkative guy. Furthermore, I could saw see that he is still a very powerful, strong person.

We shared our bucket lists.
Many of the things such as sky diving, scuba diving, as well as and treating our parents for to overseas journeys overlapped each other's list.
However, my face flushed when I listened to his well-prepared plan to make it real. I've got have just a list, but it is merely an ambiguous one.

Anyway, before leaving, I grasped his hand, and we promised that someday we shall do some of the adventures in on our list together.

I'm firmly sure certain he will throw off the shackles of the cancer soon.

Cancer sucks. Your friend will be in my prayers.

My friend's Bucket List

A few weeks ago,
I heard a shocking bad news of about my friend who's got a cancer. (you could also write "about my friend having cancer")

He is at of the same age of mine as me, so I felt misery and surrow sorrow at the same time.

So, yesterday, I visited my friend in a at the hospital.
Before getting into the room, I couldn't help but imagined how he looks would look.

Aside from other changes in his appearnces such as his bald head which has been shaped by devastatingly strong anti-cancer medication, what I was mostly have been concerning concerned about was his inanimate and weary eyes.

However, when I stepped into the room and looked at him, precisely in/at his eyes, I could see him in a whole new light.

He was at that moment very energetic. He doesn't didn't seem to be a patient, even never like a patient not even one who had caught a cold.
He said he has had become little calm since he started fighting with cancer but he was a still a talkative guy. Furthermore, I could saw see he is was still a very powerful, strong person.

We shared our bucket lists.
Many of the things such as sky diving, scuba diving as well as treating parents for to an overseas journey overlaps overlapped each other's list.
However, my face flushed when I listened to his well-prepared plan to make it real. I've got just a list but merely an ambiguous one.

Anyway, before leaving, I grasped his hand and we promised that some day we shall do some adventures in our list together.

I'm firmly sure he will throw off the shackles of the cancer soon.

Once again, I am so terribly sorry for your friend, but it's nice to hear that he has a fighting spirit and hasn't given up hope. Lucky for him, he has friends like you supporting him in this difficult moment.

My friend's Bucket List

A few weeks ago,
I heard a shocking bad news of about my friend who's got a cancer.

He is at the same age of mine so I felt misery and surrow  sorrow at the same time.

So, yesterday, I visited my friend in a hospital.
Before getting stepping into the room, I couldn't help but imagined how he looks.

Aside from other appearnces such as his bald head which has been shaped by devastatingly strong anti-cancer medication, what I mostly have been concerning about was his inanimate and weary eyes.

However, when I stepped into the room and looked at him, precisely his eyes, I could see him in a whole new light.

Despite his illness, he was at that moment very energetic at that moment. He doesn't didn't seem to be a patient, even never like a patient who caught a cold.
He said he has become little calm since he started fighting with cancer but he was still  a still talkative guy. Furthermore, I could saw see he is still a very powerful, strong person.

We shared our bucket lists.
Many of things such as sky diving, scuba diving as well as treating parents for overseas journey overlap each other's list.
However, my face flushed when I listened to his well-prepared plan to make it real. I've got just a list but merely an ambiguous one.

Anyway, before leaving, I grasped his hand and we promised that some day we shall do some adventures in our list together.

I'm firmly sure he will throw off the shackles of the cancer soon.

hi, sorry for the news; I hope he recovers soon. Your notebook is written really wonderful; I just add something to it.

Good Luck always and greet that friend for  me please.