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with a heavy heart
i received a bad new from my mother in the morning.she told me:my grandfather died,i'm very sad when i heard of the new,this mean i miss one family member,i can't talk with him,can't see him and can't have together......grandfafher,you go
This morning, I received bad news from my mother that my grandfather died. I was very sad when I heard about it. We've lost one of our family members so that means I can't see, talk, and to be with my grandfather anymore.
We will miss you, grandfather.
with a heavy heart My deep condolence,
i received a bad new from my mother in the morning I got bad news from my mother this morning.She told me that my grandfather died. I was very sad when i heard of the new about this.This is mean I miss lost one of family member. I can't talk with him anymore , I can't see him and can't have together be with him anymore......grandfafher,you had go gone.
My version would be like this :
My deep condolence,
I got bad news from my mother this morning. She told me that my grandfather died. I was very sad when I heard about this. This is mean I lost oneof our family member. I can't talk with him anymore, I can't see him and be with him anymore. Grandfather u had gone :(
I dont mind if someone corrected my correction :)
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