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with a heavy heart i received a bad new from my mother in the morning.she told me:my grandfather died,i'm very sad when i heard of the new,this mean i miss one family member,i can't talk with him,can't see him and can't have together......grandfafher,you go

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God bless him.
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I'm sorry to hear that.
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With deepest sympathy
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with a heavy heart

i received a bad new from my mother in the morning.she told me:my grandfather died,i'm very sad when i heard of the new,this mean i miss one family member,i can't talk with him,can't see him and can't have together......grandfafher,you go

 

This morning, I received bad news from my mother that my grandfather died.  I was very sad when I heard about it. We've lost one of our family members so that means I can't see, talk, and to be with my grandfather anymore.

 

We will miss you, grandfather.

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with a heavy heart My deep condolence,

i received a bad new from my mother in the morning I got bad news from my mother this morning.She told me that my grandfather died. I was very sad when i heard of the new about this.This is  mean I miss lost one of family member. I can't talk with him anymore , I can't see him and can't have together be with him anymore......grandfafher,you had go gone.


My version would be like this :

My deep condolence,

I got bad news from my mother this morning. She told me that my grandfather died. I was very sad when I heard about this. This is mean I lost oneof our family member. I can't talk with him anymore, I can't see him and be with him anymore. Grandfather u had gone :(



I dont mind if someone corrected my correction :)


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