First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi,everyone.
 I am Chinese, I want to learn English well. Hope to improve my English. I hope to make friends and share happiness and sadness .
 I learn English because I am interested in learning English. I am eager to communicate with foreigners and want to know what happens (is happening) all over the world. At the same time, I want to earn more money by speaking English well. I want to make my outlook brighter.
Thanks to people who read or correct my composition.
 I am good in Chinese. I am ready to help if you have any problem with Mandarin (Chinese). Just let me know.

Kate.



** hi Kate, your English is really excellent. Each of your expressions sounds very natural..... simple, brief and exact. If someone reads through your composition, he/she won't have to stumble on difficult words or grammar patterns. This is an excellent style of writing. If you can maintain this style, you will soon become quite proficient in your oral English as well.

Please take care of the CAPITAL letters and punctuation marks. Those are the only major corrections that I had to do. Thank you!