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First notebook entry: Introducing myself firstly,English has became the tool of world communication.We can use this language as our common language to connect oach other without any difficult. Then,I want to say that English has also made the world become smaller than ever.We can use this language to share our idea and thoughts with all kinds of differnt people all over the world. finally,I am very fond of studying English,so this impetus me most to learn it.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

firstly,English has became the tool of world communication.We can use this language as our common language to connect oach other without any difficulty.
Then,I want to say that English has also made the world become smaller than ever.We can use this language to share our ideas and thoughts with all kinds of different people all over the world.
Finally,I am very fond of studying English,so this impetus (impetus is a noun, not a verb)(maybe try "propels") me most to learn it.

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yes,that's it~
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I think you meant : Finally, I am very fond of studying English, and this has provided the impetus for me to learn it.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Firstly, English has became becomethe tool of world communication. We can use this language as our common language to connect oach eachother without any difficulty.
Then,I want to say that English has also made the world become smaller than ever. We can use this language to share our ideas and thoughts with all kinds of different people all over the world.
Finally, I am very fond of studying English, so this impetus me most* encourages me to learn it.

 

* - what do you want to say?

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Firstly,_English has became the tool of world communication._We can use this language as our common language to connect to each other without any difficulty.
ThenSecondly,_I want to say that English has also made the world become smaller than ever._We can use this language to share our ideas and thoughts with all kinds of different people all over the world.
Finally,_I am very fond of studying English,_so this impetus(?? what do you mean by this? ><') pushes me most to learn it.
 

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