In memory of the died people
Four years ago, there is a strong earthquake in China Sichuan province. The earthquake wreaked havoc on the area.So many people died in this great disaster.I hope they could live a happy life in paradise,and we should cherish our lives when we are alive.
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In memory of the died(dead) people:
Four years ago, there is(was) a strong earthquake in China Sichuan province(the Sichuan province of China). The earthquake wreaked havoc on the area. So many people died in this great disaster. I hope they could live a happy life in paradise*, and we should cherish our lives when we are alive.
* - I don't know what you want to say exactly, but this sentence does not make sense. The overall meaning is understood though.
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In memory of those that have died.
Four years ago, there was a strong earthquake in China's Sichuan province. The earthquake wreaked havoc on the area. So many people died in this great disaster. I hope they live a happy life in paradise. We should cherish our lives when we are alive.
Is this the paradise you are hoping for?: http://www.watchtower.org/chs/t15/article_01.htm
They can live again: http://www.watchtower.org/chs/bh/article_07.htm
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