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A warm-hearted man Today after lunch with my colleague,we wandered along the street, at that time, my phone was ringing, I picked it out from my pocket and began to speak with my mother. Suddenly a voice shouted at me, I turned back and saw a women and man, the man told me that 10 Yuan falled from my pocket when I pick out my phone, and he joked at me: If you falled 100Yuan, I'll take it away, now is 10Yuan, so I called you! what an interesting and warm-hearted man, I said thank to them with smile. I think although general mood of society is worse and worse, there are still warm-hearted men!

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A warm-hearted man

Today after lunch with my colleague,we wandered along the street, at that time, my phone was ringing, I picked pulled it out from my pocket and began to speak with my mother. Suddenly a voice shouted at me, I turned back and saw a women and man, the man told me that 10 Yuan falled fell out from my pocket when I  picked pulled out my phone, and he joked at with me: If you falled dropped 100Yuan, I'llI'd take it away, but now it is 10Yuan, so I called you! what an interesting and warm-hearted man, I said thank to them him with smile.
I think that although the general mood of society is getting worse and worse, there are still warm-hearted men!

 

- picked is grammatically correct, just not as natural or used.  usually you pull something out of your pocket.  a thief might "pick your pocket"

- past tense of fall is fell. he/it falls, but i/you drop.  so the cell fell out of my pocket, and i dropped it. 

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